Comments on: Zoe – Killing Friends 12

By: Marie Clarke

Marie Clarke — Sun, 13 Nov 2011 22:53:14 +0000

Heeeessss back!!! Great story Mark. I almost puked. And Zoe, OMG, beautiful and deadly, gotta love it.

By: Jeff Elston

Jeff Elston — Sun, 13 Nov 2011 18:32:09 +0000

I always knew Zoe was evil. This just proves everything. Good read, my favorite part was the Gibson and les paul line.

By: madaline

madaline — Sat, 12 Nov 2011 19:19:15 +0000

Mark don’t go home with her!!! your suppose to be coming home for xmas..ha ha!!

By: C L Raven

C L Raven — Sat, 12 Nov 2011 15:32:16 +0000

Loved this! Zoe is such an amazing character – beautiful, flawed, has a wonderfully black sense of humour which worryingly matches ours and everyone dies! It was funny, dark and full of blood. What more could you want from a story? We hate Hollywood happy endings and this story ended perfectly. Gold star!

By: Kayla

Kayla — Sat, 12 Nov 2011 08:43:36 +0000

Great story, mark! I really like the line about homeless guys following her in to hell for a little bit of booze. It has a nice ring to it. I’m glad you’re posting again!

By: The Muse

The Muse — Fri, 11 Nov 2011 22:50:21 +0000

I especially liked the part where she killed Phil.

By: Elena Jacob

Elena Jacob — Fri, 11 Nov 2011 07:23:55 +0000

That was awesome! I’m a sucker for serial killer stories, and rarely do we get to see female serial killers, so this was doubly enjoyable for that Very well-crafted – I wish I was better with short fiction; you do a good job of fleshing out your characters in a short space

Bravo